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Fri Dec 23, 2005, 11:30 AM

Emptiness when it seems full..
Sadness when it seems happy..
Dullness when it looks colorful..
Frozen when it feels warm..
Giving when it needs to have..
Falling when it looks standing tall..
Fragile when it looks strong..
Dark when it strikes out light..
Smiling when it cries river inside..
Thirsty when it waters like a spring..
Hollow when it looks the opposite.

Dove
11:33pm
December 23 2005

7 Comments

Devious Comments

~MaDaMe-EviL Dec 23, 2005, 11:37:56 AM

Extreme opposites ... a pretty intense poem!
Luvs it... Rock on gurl!

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"Moments die, bringing memories to life" T.A

~Dovaneh Dec 23, 2005, 11:47:33 AM

Your comments are much appreciated.. Thanxx sister for your opnion.. it really means alot to me..

glad to have you around..

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It is always the photographer behind the camera who does it all.

= Dovaneh

~3asool Dec 23, 2005, 7:13:40 PM

mashallah 3alech very nice poem

love this part
Smiling when it cries river inside..
Thirsty when it waters like a spring..
Hollow when it looks the opposite.

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3asool but be careful

~Droubi Dec 23, 2005, 8:13:33 PM

Very nice one

I really like it dear ^_^

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~Be yourSelf~
Join us at the Emirates

~S-H-M-I-L-Y Dec 24, 2005, 12:38:21 AM

well done.. its been a while since I read any of ur writings..

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I just miss you its as simple as that!
I just want you to fill my blanks, and set me free the way I was..

Join us at the Emirates

~Emeraldyeh Dec 24, 2005, 4:32:24 AM

exquisite words.. !

didnt know that ur a great poet

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All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.